Hi and welcome to my blog. I'm in Totara 2 and my teacher is Miss Hines. We're a class of Year 7 and 8 students in Totara at Grey Main School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Hi Sam. Well done for following the instructions and making the origami dog. How does the reader of your blog know what this post is about? You need to make sure you are explaining your tasks clearly.
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Sorry that was a mistake.Hi Sam,My name is Reitu and I am a year 7 at Paihia School in Te Ngahere. I like you origami puppy. I like how you have put the instructions on your presentation. But you have to explain your tasks clearly.Why did you make an origami dog?Why did you choose an origami dog?
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